Feb 13th, 2011
Huang Huan
29 Prince George’s Park Singapore 118426
Mobile: 65-96166741
E-Mail: happyhuang17@gmail.com
Wong Mei Leng Jenny
Group Human Resources
80 Raffles Place
UOB Plaza 1, #07-01
Singapore 048624
UOB Plaza 1, #07-01
Singapore 048624
Dear Ms. Wong,
I am a science student from National University of Singapore. I will graduate in May, 2011 with a certified honours degree in Statistics with specialisation in finance. I have great interest in personal banking industry. I like meeting and talking to people, understanding their needs, helping them achieve their financial goals.
During my 4 years life in university, I have been actively participated in people-oriented activities. I have worked as a Marketing&Communication Executive for NUS Entrepreneurship Society, the 2nd biggest student organisation in NUS. I was responsible of reporting various events organised by the Society and publishing their semi-annual newsletter. My communication skills have been enhanced and approved. Besides this, I initiated and organised a big school event, a 3-day Campus Bazaar by cooperating with Tangs. Through this event, my team achieved the highest club fund we have ever raised, 3000SGD.
In the beginning of 2010, I was selected by school to participate in the innovative Local Enterprise Achiever Development (iLEAD) Programme under the NUS Overseas College. I have worked in a local company which provides business consultation&branding services and completed 2 weeks overseas study mission in Silicon Valley, US. My internship experience in a service-oriented company has strengthened me with great flexibility, communication and people skills. Having a positive attitude and keen learning spirits, I was able to take on challenges which I have never encountered before and rapport well with different people. My fast learning abilities and good adaptability have been approved by my boss.
Being a very positive and passionate fresh graduate, I have confidence to start my career in the personal banking industry and desire to making progress and providing great services to the customers. I look forward to an opportunity in meeting you for an interview.
Yours sincerely,
Huang Huan
( For the job description, please view http://www.uobgroup.com/about/careers/graduate_careers/personal_banking_associate.html )
Hi Huang Huan,
回复删除Good job for your application letter! It is impressive. It is great that you have quite numerous working experience and also something to boost about from your CCA.
It is great that you wrote the figure '3000SGD' as it perfectly reflects how high was the fund that your team had raised.
Overall, your resume looked perfect to me.
Perhaps you may want to look through for grammatical errors if there are.
Good luck for your job hunt! :)